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GIFTS! - Happy Birthday SailorMoonAndSonicX

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Happy Birthday Kyla from :iconsailormoonandsonicx:! From me, my characters and Sugar and Faira!!! A present that tells you to Find the Music in you!!!

Oh and this is also a gift for my two really awesome friends Twizz and Gwen!!!

Okay lets carry on with the song, enjoy Kyla and Charon!!! :D

(Erasmo)

( Doo Wop style scatting)

(Everyone)

(Harmonizing)

(Erasmo)

Walk outside and you see the sunshine
Something's in the air today
Sky is clear and you're feelin' so fine
Everything's gonna be a-okay

(Brad and Faira)

If you listen carefully
On every corner there's a rhythm playing
Then it happens suddenly
The music takes you over and you'll

(Everyone)

Find you've got the music ( Sugar: Fiiiiind the music)
Got the music in you
Find you've got the music ( Sugar: Fiiiiind the music)
Got the music in you

(Erasmo)

Oh, o-o-oh
Everybody's sayin' you should learn to express your voice
But if talk doesn't seem like it's the answer

[All]

Luckily you have a choice
When you find you've got the music ( Sugar: Fiiiiind the music)
Got the music in you
Find you've got the music ( Sugar: Fiiiiind the music)
Got the music in you
Got the music, got the music in you!


Charon the Hedgehog ~ (c) :iconsailormoonandsonicx:
Sugar the Sugar Glider ~ (c) :icontwizzle-fizz:
Faira the Cat ~ (c) :iconnightshade-warroir:
Erasmo the Sand Slicer and Brad Slashback ~ (c) Me!
Ponytones Concept ~ (c) My Little Pony/Hasbro


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imajenink's avatar
I think this is a very joyful picture, the poses and expressions are nice, but i think you should take it a step further and try some shading. It'll really bring out your pictures way more :3
Also I think you should try different perspectives, instead of just a flat plain, try facing the pic towards them like from Charon's point of view, to get a better idea of what she's looking at.
I'm curious of what program you use for lineart. It looks like illustrator, but i'm not sure. If it is I can give you some tips for that program because I use it alot for my lineart  ^^
For the text I think you should try to put some lyrics into the pic instead just music notes.  They're not bad but it'll be easier to tell what they're singing and you could add music notes around the text.
I also think you should try some different colors for the "Happy Birthday Kyla" It's a little hard to read at first and you should probably stay clear brush you used for it.
Hope this helps :3    - Jenn